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You travelled by a long-distance bus recently an your suitcase was damaged. write a letter to the bus company. In your letter. -inform the bus company of when an to where you travelled -describe your suitcase and what happened to it -explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase You should write at least 150 words.

You travelled by a long-distance bus recently an your suitcase was damaged. write a letter to the bus company. In your letter. -inform the bus company of when an to where you travelled -describe your suitcase and what happened to it -explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase NEkN
Combination of all the Books written in the history of mankind are insufficient to cover the knowledge available in this universe. It is simply impossible to contain everything that is available. Hence, I am of the view that only combination of literature based knowledge along with practicle knowledge are integral for complete knowledge. Documentation and record keeping have been possible only after development of language and text. On the top of that as a ritual tribes as well as civilizations prefered to passing on knowledge through verbal communication. Therefore, acquiring knowledge has two parts namely theoritical and practicle. The extent of knowledge is infinitly large to capture them entirely on books. Hence, it creates scope for the knowledge that should be acquired via experience. In contrast, not all knowledge can be acquired through experience. For instance, study of redioactive material is far risky to learn with experience. While the knowledge in books once they are written is easyly passed from one learner to another. Conversly, knowledge from experience demands each student to go through the learning process personally. This may be time consuming and discouraging to scholars persuing knowledge. In my view, knowledge gained from books and one acquired through experiences are equally important. One is incomplete without another. Both of them have their own value preposition depending on the circumstances.
Combination of all the
Books
written in the history of mankind are insufficient to cover the
knowledge
available in this universe. It is
simply
impossible to contain everything
that is
available.
Hence
, I am of the view that
only
combination of literature based
knowledge
along with
practicle
knowledge
are integral for complete knowledge.

Documentation and record keeping have been possible
only
after development of language and text. On the top of that as a ritual
tribes
as well
as civilizations
prefered
to passing on
knowledge
through
verbal communication.
Therefore
, acquiring
knowledge
has two parts
namely
theoritical
and
practicle
.

The extent of
knowledge
is
infinitly
large to capture them
entirely
on
books
.
Hence
, it creates scope for the
knowledge
that should
be acquired
via
experience
.
In contrast
, not all
knowledge
can
be acquired
through
experience
.
For instance
, study of
redioactive
material is far risky to learn with experience.

While the
knowledge
in
books
once they
are written
is
easyly
passed from one learner to another.
Conversly
,
knowledge
from
experience
demands each student to go
through
the learning process
personally
. This may be
time consuming
and discouraging to scholars
persuing
knowledge.

In my view,
knowledge
gained from
books
and one acquired
through
experiences
are
equally
important
. One is incomplete without another. Both of them have their
own
value preposition depending on the circumstances.
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IELTS letter You travelled by a long-distance bus recently an your suitcase was damaged. write a letter to the bus company. In your letter. -inform the bus company of when an to where you travelled -describe your suitcase and what happened to it -explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
221 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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