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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: - tell your friend what the event was - tell why you think your friend would like the event - invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: - tell your friend what the event was - tell why you think your friend would like the event - invite them to come to the event with you mQxr
Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well. Last weekend, I attended an exhibition, which to my surprise turned out to be quite interesting and I believe you would have enjoyed it. My colleague was invited to this Culinary Exhibition, which took place inside a house of our favorite restaurant. Since she had an extra ticket, she asked me to tag along. At first, I assumed that it would be boring but it was a highly sophisticated event. Considering that you are fond of cooking, you should attend the event. In addition to that, different restaurant owners were also present at the event. This could be a good opportunity for you, allowing you to make connections since you want are in the process of starting your own food venture. The good news is that the event is going to take place again next month and my colleague has given me her extra tickets. Let me confirm your availability so I can share the event details with you. Best wishes, Ifrah.
Dear Sara,

I hope you are doing well. Last weekend, I attended an exhibition, which to my surprise turned out to be quite interesting and I believe you would have enjoyed it.

My colleague
was invited
to this Culinary Exhibition, which took place inside a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
of our favorite restaurant. Since she had an extra ticket, she asked me to tag along. At
first
, I assumed that it would be boring
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but
it was a
highly
sophisticated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.

Considering that you are fond of cooking, you should attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
.
In addition
to that,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
restaurant owners were
also
present at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
. This could be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
opportunity for you, allowing you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
connections since you want are in the process of starting your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
food venture.

The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news is that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
is going to take place again
next
month and my colleague has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
me her extra tickets.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me confirm your availability
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can share the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
with you.

Best wishes,

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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: - tell your friend what the event was - tell why you think your friend would like the event - invite them to come to the event with you

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6.0
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