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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter · give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre · explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community · describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter · give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre · explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community · describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes nY5R
Deare Sir or Madam My name is William and have been living in this town since I was born. My family and I as well as my friends were all very happy and lucky to have the sport center close to where we live since we were able to release our stress from work and study, playing tennis and basketball together on a regular basis. But today, I have heard the news that the local council is now considering closing a sport and leisure center. The center has served as a really useful and practical place for the town residents in regard of health and sociality as It can be the easiest way to get to know your neighbors playing and enjoying together. So you are more likely able to make a good connection with them. If the center closes, we are losing all of these good chances and it’s obvious that we have to travel far to other towns to use the facility, or even some people might give up working out. Therefore, I hope the council would consider it in positive way to keep the center open
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My name is William and have been living in this town since I
was born
. My family and I
as well
as my friends were all
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happy and lucky to have the sport center close to where we
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live
since we were able to release our
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stress
from work and study, playing tennis and basketball together on a regular basis.

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today
, I have heard the news that the local council is
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considering closing a sport and leisure center. The center has served as a
really
useful and practical place for the town residents in regard of health and
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as It can be the easiest way to
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to know your neighbors playing and enjoying together.
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you are more likely able to
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make
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good
connection with them.

If the center closes, we are losing all of these
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good
chances and it’s obvious that we
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have to
travel far to other towns to
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use
the facility, or even
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some
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people
might give up working out.

Therefore
, I hope the council would consider it in
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positive
way to
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keep
the center open
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter · give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre · explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community · describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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