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As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available. rrjm
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to asking for information regarding a historical exhibition which will be hosted in Patiala. As a part of student social survey project, I am going to organize a group of student to visit a historical exhibition. In Exhibition, It will be show different cultures, traditions and antic weapons which were used by Mughal Emperors or Guru Gobind Singh? Moreover, This exhibition is useful for History students or P. H. D students to write a thesis? Could you provide the exhibition dates when exhibition will open and last date of the exhibition. In addition to, please mention the timing of the exhibhition. If, There is any special time for groups please bestow the documents which we needed to enter as a group in exhibition! Moreover, Is any special discounts are available on student card or not? Is any special site to book the date for exhibition or purchase the ticket for students? Please the provide the helpline details consequently that we can clear our doubt. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerly, Simranpreet kaur
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to asking for information regarding a historical exhibition which will
be hosted
in
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Patiala
.

As a part of
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student
social survey project, I am going to organize a group of
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student
to visit a historical exhibition. In Exhibition, It will be
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show
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different
cultures, traditions and antic weapons which were
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used
by Mughal Emperors or Guru
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Gobind
Singh?
Moreover
, This exhibition is useful for History
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students
or P. H. D
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students
to write a thesis?

Could you provide the exhibition dates when exhibition will open and last date of the exhibition.
In addition
to,
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please
mention the timing of the
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exhibhition
. If, There is any special time for groups
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please
bestow the documents which we needed to enter as a group in exhibition!

Moreover
, Is any special discounts are available on
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student
card or not? Is any special site to book the date for exhibition or
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purchase
the ticket for
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students
?
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Please
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the provide
the helpline
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details
consequently
that we can
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clear
our doubt.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
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Sincerly
,

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Simranpreet
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kaur
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IELTS letter As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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