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Your company has recently introduced new uniform for the staffs. Write a letter to your manager that you are not happy with the new uniform: Explain why you are not happy with the new uniform What you want new uniform to be like Giving some suggestions.

Your company has recently introduced new uniform for the staffs. Write a letter to your manager that you are not happy with the new uniform: Explain why you are not happy with the new uniform What you want new uniform to be like Giving some suggestions. 0n8pn

Dear Mr. James, I am writing to raise my concerns towards the uniform that has been recently introduced for employees and would like to suggest few amendments our organization can make to improve uniform. Very first point I want to highlight is that the current uniform is too uncomfortable because of ill-fitting. Poor-fitted uniform affects my day to day productivity. Another issue is with its poor quality. Low quality stitching is being used which lead to tears and breakages after minimal wear and that is too embarrassing at workplace. As departments in an organization keep expanding every year, It is not feasible to size up each employee. Therefore, I suggest that adjustable features such as fabric made of polyester blend to be used to better suit all the body types. Also additional sizes such as XXS to XXXL should be covered for exceptions. In order to improve the quality, our company management should ensure to choose best supplier while placing an order. Moreover, slight increase in the budget will be really helpful to get best quality uniform for its employees. I hope that you would look into this matter promptly and take my suggestions under consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ell Green

Dear Mr. James,

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 expanding every year, It is not feasible to size up each employee. Therefore
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quality
, our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
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 management should ensure to A determiner is probably missing here: "choose the best".choose the best
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 supplier while placing an order. Moreover
, slight increase in the budget will be really
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quality
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uniform
 for its employees.

I hope that you would look into this matter promptly
 and take my suggestions under consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

Ell Green