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Dear Sir! God bless you. Hope you will be fine

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Dear Sir! God bless you. Hope you will be fine I came across your library while searching on the internet and I was not only surprised but happy to see that you people are doing a very good job. Especially the series of English conversation classes that you have started is worth it. Praise be to Allah. You are helping so many poor students like us who can't afford to spend a lot of money on learning English. I attended the last two classes and found them very useful and standard. Almost all of your colleagues are sociable, helpful, sincere, and kind, I pray to God for the health and safety of all of you. ۔ In this letter I am writing inspired by these qualities of yours, in fact, I am preparing for IELTS these days, the purpose of which is to pass this exam and do research from a good university in a good English speaking country. My field has been media, but the environment I got was not English but Urdu and Hindi. I have tried my best to learn this language. But despite my best efforts, I have not been able to achieve that much. What should have been done, I kindly request you to cooperate in this regard. My father is a teacher at a local school. I don't have the money to pay the hefty fee. I, therefore, request you to arrange an English teacher for me online or give yourself some time to me. I will be very grateful to you. I hope you will not reject my request and will definitely support me. Thanks Muhammad Alamullah
Dear Sir!

God bless you.

Hope you will be fine

I came across your library while searching on the
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internet and
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surprised
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happy to
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that you
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are doing a
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job.
Especially
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started
is worth it. Praise be to Allah. You are helping
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so
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many
poor students like us who can't afford to spend
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a lot of
money on learning English.

I attended the last two classes and found them
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very
useful and standard. Almost all of your colleagues are sociable, helpful, sincere, and kind, I pray to God for the health and safety of all of you. ۔

In this letter I am writing inspired by these qualities of yours, in fact, I am preparing for IELTS these days, the purpose of which is to pass this exam and do research from a
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good
university in a
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good
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English speaking
country.

My field has been media,
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but
the environment I
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got
was not English
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Urdu and Hindi. I have tried my best to learn this language.
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But
despite my best efforts, I have not been able to achieve that much. What should have
been done
, I kindly request you to cooperate in this regard.

My father is a teacher at a local school. I don't have the money to pay the hefty fee. I,
therefore
, request you to arrange an English teacher for me online or give yourself
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some
time to me.
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I
will be
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grateful to you.

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I
hope you will not reject my request and will definitely support me.

Thanks

Muhammad
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Alamullah
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IELTS letter Dear Sir! God bless you. Hope you will be fine

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  American English
11 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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