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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course.

You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. d5KQX
My name is Michael, one of the students who are taking a part-time 'Digital Marketing' course with you. I am writing this letter to let you know that I would not be able to attend classes from 17th July onwards. I work with a digital marketing company as a junior content writer and as a result of some recently assigned projects, I have been handed a few additional responsibilities at my full-time job. This means that I would need to spend additional time at my office and thus it is highly unlikely that I will be able to arrive at your class on time. Even if I show up in your classroom after my office work is completed, I would be very exhausted because of the excess time spent on the traffic-congested road. However, I am willing to complete my course as it would be highly beneficial for my career. Therefore, I humbly request you to allow me to attend the next available batch. This would make it very convenient for me to balance my job and the course. I would really appreciate your help regarding this. Yours sincerely
My name is Michael, one of the students who are taking a part-time 'Digital Marketing' course with you. I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I would not be able to attend classes from 17th July onwards.

I work with a digital marketing
company
as a junior content writer and
as a result
of
some
recently assigned projects, I have
been handed
a few additional responsibilities at my full-time job. This means that I would need to spend additional time at my office and
thus
it is
highly
unlikely that I will be able to arrive at your
class
on time. Even if I
show
up in your classroom after my office work
is completed
, I would be
very
exhausted
because
of the excess time spent on the traffic-congested road.

However
, I am willing to complete my course as it would be
highly
beneficial for my career.
Therefore
, I
humbly
request you to
allow
me to attend the
next
available batch. This would
make
it
very
convenient for me to balance my job and the course.

I would
really
appreciate your
help
regarding this.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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