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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Some members of your city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. This will allow pedestrians and bicyclists to use the roads freely. Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter • Explain how you heard about the plan • Provide some possible effects of this plan • Give your opinion about the plan

Some members of your city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. This will allow pedestrians and bicyclists to use the roads freely. Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter • Explain how you heard about the plan • Provide some possible effects of this plan • Give your opinion about the plan Nm9l2
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to provide my opinion about stopping vehicular traffic on city center roads. I saw an article in the newspaper that the suggestion, which is include vehicle restriction, has been discussed during the last meeting, which was held at the city council. In further, many people who live in our area discuss critically of this new plan. Then, it is a famous topic among city community. If the proposal happens, it will affect to people who ride bicycles and travel on foot positively because they can commute without any safety precautions. Moreover, air pollution of the town will be reduced since low percentage of CO2 and other toxins, which are included in emission of vehicles. I believed that it is more proactive approach in order to deal with road accidents and environmental issues in city roads. Last year, many accidents have been reported due to high volumes of vehicles that travel daily basis. However, I think, it might stop completely in the future because of this new policy. Yours faithfully, Malinda Amunugama.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to provide my opinion about stopping vehicular traffic on city center roads.

I
saw
an article in the newspaper that the suggestion, which is
include
vehicle restriction, has
been discussed
during the last meeting, which
was held
at the city council. In
further
,
many
people
who
live
in our area discuss
critically
of this new plan. Then, it is a
famous
topic among city community.

If the proposal happens, it will affect to
people
who ride bicycles and travel on foot
positively
because
they can commute without any safety precautions.
Moreover
, air pollution of the town will be
reduced
since low percentage of CO2 and other toxins, which
are included
in emission of vehicles.

I believed that it is more proactive approach in order to deal with road accidents and environmental issues in city roads. Last year,
many
accidents have
been reported
due to high volumes of vehicles that travel daily basis.
However
, I
think
, it might
stop
completely in the future
because of this
new policy.

Yours
faithfully
,

Malinda
Amunugama
.
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IELTS letter Some members of your city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. This will allow pedestrians and bicyclists to use the roads freely. Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter • Explain how you heard about the plan • Provide some possible effects of this plan • Give your opinion about the plan

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