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You live in a room in college which you share with another student.

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. aq9P7

Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing well and safe. I am writing to this letter to inform you that I am currently facing many problems in the college accommodation. I am Chanaka Ranatunge and I am now following IT degree in your college. So, currently I am using college hostel since three months. That room is a shared basis. So, I am facing many problems in the accommodation due to my room mate Most of the time. I am doing my studies in my free times. At the movement, I cannot doing my Studies smoothly. There are the reasons of that situation. Firstly, he watching movies with loud sounds. Most of the times I have complained for his. Secondly, he chatting with his girlfriend till midnight. Thirdly, he mostly smoking in the room avoiding hostel regulations So, I am now facing lot of difficulties to my studies. I hope you request you Then consider my current situation. So, I kindly request you to give me a single room for my accommodation. Ten I can do my studies and works without any issues. Yours faithfully, Chanalca Ranatunge

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope you are doing well and safe. I am writing to this letter to inform you that I am currently
 facing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems in the college accommodation.

I am Possible spelling mistake found.Chan aka
Chanaka
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Ranatunge and
 I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 following IT degree in your college. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, currently
 I am using college hostel Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)for
since
 three months. That You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 is a shared basis. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I am facing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems in the accommodation due to my This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.room-materoommate
room mate


Most of the time. I am doing my studies in my free times. At the movement, I cannot The verb 'cannot' requires the base form of the verb: "do"do
doing
 my Studies smoothly
. There are the reasons of that situation. Firstly
, Did you mean "he's watching", "he is watching", or "he was watching"?he's watchinghe is watchinghe was watching
he watching
 movies with loud sounds. Consider using "most of the time" if you mean "usually" or "very often".Most of the time
Most of the times
 I have The usual collocation for "complained" is "about" not "for". Did you mean "complained about"?complained about
complained for
 his. Secondly
, Did you mean "he's chatting", "he is chatting", or "he was chatting"?he's chattinghe is chattinghe was chatting
he chatting
 with his girlfriend till midnight. Thirdly
, he mostly
 smoking in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 avoiding hostel regulations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 facing It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 difficulties to my studies.

I hope you request you Then consider my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I kindly request you to give me a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 for my accommodation. Ten I can do my studies and works without any issues.

Yours faithfully
,

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