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You have worked fora a company for a short time during your college course. Write a letter to the head of department expressing your gratitude. In your letter, you should: Thank the head of the department. Explain how this has helped you. Say what your future plans are.

You have worked fora a company for a short time during your college course. Write a letter to the head of department expressing your gratitude. In your letter, you should: Thank the head of the department. Explain how this has helped you. Say what your future plans are. RkEXM
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to you to express my gratitude. your guidance, support, and teaching method help me a lot to learn in your company. thank you for all lesson. When I join your coffee shop! I do not know how to use coffee machine, ice maker, and blinder. However, you give me opportunity to know about all of this machinery as well as cleaning process. Now I can work as a barista anywhere around the world. This means a lot to me. I applied in Starbucks Dubai last month for barista position, and they select me. They want me to join as soon as possible. I believe, this well help me to grow more in my future. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely, khadka
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to you to express my gratitude.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
guidance, support, and teaching method
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me a lot to learn in your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
thank
you for all lesson.

When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your coffee shop! I do not know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
coffee machine, ice maker, and blinder.
However
, you give me opportunity to know about all of this machinery
as well
as cleaning process.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I can work as a barista anywhere around the world. This means a lot to me.

I applied in Starbucks Dubai last month for barista position, and they select me. They want me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. I believe, this well
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to grow more in my future.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours
sincerely
,
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khadka
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IELTS letter You have worked fora a company for a short time during your college course. Write a letter to the head of department expressing your gratitude. In your letter, you should: Thank the head of the department. Explain how this has helped you. Say what your future plans are.

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  American English
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130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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