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Write a letter to a newspaper, giving The Society's version of events and asking them to print another article.

Dear Editor, I am writing on behalf of the Black Night Medieval Society in regard to the report published on November the sixth about the annual Medieval Fair. The report draws readers’ attention to trenchant criticism leveled at our inability to organize a decent entertainment that would be as impressive as in previous years. To begin with, the greatest value of the event held should not be underestimated. The archery display sparked avid interest among young children while the medieval music and dancing proved to be engaging which altogether seek to compensate for some of our shortcomings. Had it not been for the conspicuous lack of parking place, regular attendance would not have fallen; hence people’s interest in it. Likewise, insufficient amount of space is accountable for the small number of demonstrations we were able to offer. Secondly, many commented on the low standard of dancing and undermined the very demonstration of cookery and craft skills. Be that as it may, preparation for the event as well as the choice of activities has always been done meticulously while numerous readers’ emails serve as an undeniable proof of our professionalism. To sum up, our expert evaluation of both the preparation and people’s feedback undoubtedly highlights that it was a resounding success providing people with obvious satisfaction and overwhelmingly positive emotions. Taking into account the aforementioned, a professional report comprising accurate information on the very event and deep analysis of the readers’ feedback is highly recommended to be delivered. We are looking forward to reading an informative article. Yours faithfully, Iryna Vovk
Dear Editor,

I am writing on behalf of the Black Night Medieval Society in regard to the report published on November the sixth about the annual Medieval
Fair
. The report draws readers’ attention to trenchant criticism leveled at our inability to organize a decent entertainment that would be as impressive as in previous years.

To
begin
with, the greatest value of the
event
held should not
be underestimated
. The archery display sparked avid interest among young children while the medieval music and dancing proved to be engaging which altogether seek to compensate for
some
of our shortcomings. Had it not been for the conspicuous lack of parking place, regular attendance would not have fallen;
hence
people
’s interest in it.
Likewise
, insufficient amount of space is accountable for the
small
number of demonstrations we were able to offer.

Secondly
,
many
commented on the low standard of dancing and undermined the
very
demonstration of cookery and craft
skills
. Be that as it may, preparation for the
event
as well
as the choice of activities has always
been done
meticulously
while numerous readers’ emails serve as an undeniable proof of our professionalism.

To sum up, our expert evaluation of both the preparation and
people
’s feedback
undoubtedly
highlights that it was a resounding success providing
people
with obvious satisfaction and
overwhelmingly
positive
emotions. Taking into account the aforementioned, a professional report comprising accurate information on the
very
event
and deep analysis of the readers’ feedback is
highly
recommended to
be delivered
.

We are looking forward to reading an informative article.

Yours
faithfully
,

Iryna
Vovk
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a newspaper, giving The Society's version of events and asking them to print another article.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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