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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Dear Ravi, Hope this letter will find you in good health and high spirits. I would like to invite you on my parents 25th marriage anniversary on coming 25th June which will be celebrated on Beverly Hills Parks in front of huge gathering of guests. Everyone from family has got assigned for their duties and entertainment of crowd would be part of my responsibility. I am planning to arrange a musical performance with some melody and jazz songs. As you know, i am good singer but vocals are in complete without your drum beats and guitar. Hence i request your presence on that auspicious day for which i am sending you return air flight ticket in advance. Please don't refuse as i know your schedule is very tight due to exams. With love, Romy
Dear Ravi, Hope this letter will find you in
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good
health and high spirits. I would like to invite you on my parents 25th
Wedding anniversaries are the proper term to describe the anniversary of the day of a wedding.
marriage
anniversary on coming 25th June which will
be celebrated
on
Beverly
Hills Parks in front of huge gathering of guests. Everyone from family has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
assigned for their duties and entertainment of crowd would be part of my responsibility. I am planning to arrange a musical performance with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
melody and jazz songs.

As you know,
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
singer
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
vocals are in complete without your drum beats and guitar.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
request your presence on that auspicious day for which
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am sending you return air flight ticket in advance.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
don't refuse as
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
know your schedule is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
tight due to exams.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Romy
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
133 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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