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ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

Dear Peter, I am writing in to inform you that I could not continue my history's evening class due to working as a full time eployee in multinational company. It will be difficult for me to continue my classes with working more than 40 hours per week. As you know I am your student of your history class and I am also a manager of data structure in IT department of a company from last few months. But, now my company wants to me to work overtime for upcoming months because, they assign me a project where I have to give my best. In consquence I have to leave my studies till that time. Can you please send me the details of further formalities to stop my semester classes. I am looking forward to get response from you to complete all these steps. your faithfull rajwinder kaur
Dear Peter,

I am writing in to inform you that I could not continue my history's evening
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due to working as a full time
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in multinational
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. It will be difficult for me to continue my
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classes
with working more than 40 hours per week.

As you know I am your student of your history
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class
and I am
also
a manager of data structure in IT department of a
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company
from last few months.
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,
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my
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company
wants to me to work overtime for upcoming months
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because
, they assign me a project where I
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give my best. In
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consquence
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have to
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my studies till that time.

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send
me the
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details
of
further
formalities to
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stop
my semester
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classes
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.
I am looking forward to
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get
response from you to complete all these steps.

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your
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faithfull


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rajwinder
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kaur

IELTS letter ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay:

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6 paragraphs
146 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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