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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to our family function on the occasion of my parents golden jubilee wedding anniversary, which is on 22nd of june at our club house. As this is my parents 50th wedding anniversary, I decided to celebrate grandly with all our dear ones. I have planned to invite all my parent's colleagues and friends to cherish their young days memories. Also, I have organised a couple dance for all the elderly people on old melody songs. Since you are a wonderful guitarist, I would like you to play a song for my parents, it will be a great surprise for them. I would really appreciate if you visit and join us in this party, as this will be great time to introduce you with my whole family. they have heard a lot about you, as I always talk about fun activities that we do together and I also share our officail tour pictures with them as well, they will be truelly happy to meet you. Waiting for a positive revert from your side. Hope to see you soon. Warm Regards Harry
Dear john,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to our family function on the occasion of my parents golden jubilee wedding anniversary, which is on 22nd of
june
at our club
house
.

As this is my parents 50th wedding anniversary, I decided to celebrate
grandly
with all our dear ones. I have planned to invite all my parent's colleagues and friends to cherish their young days memories.
Also
, I have
organised
a couple dance for all the elderly
people
on
old
melody songs. Since you are a wonderful guitarist, I would like you to play a song for my parents, it will be a great surprise for them.

I would
really
appreciate if you visit and
join
us in this party, as this will be great time to introduce you with my whole family.
they
have heard a lot about you, as I always talk about fun activities that we do
together and
I
also
share our
officail
tour pictures with them
as well
, they will be
truelly
happy to
meet
you.

Waiting for a
positive
revert from your side. Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Warm Regards

Harry
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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