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Your client wrote a complaint letter to you about the product which bought some days ago. That product was expired. You should write apology letter to him/her.

Your client wrote a complaint letter to you about the product which bought some days ago. That product was expired. You should write apology letter to him/her. 6dxmr
Dear Sir/Madam, I am executive manager of KFC store apologise on behalf of all the staff to you for delivering expired food product two days back. I realised my mistake this morning after receiving your complaint letter and hence writing this apology letter to you. You had ordered for the product two days back. Unfortunately, while delivering it, we somehow did not notice the expiry date of the product. I know it is our mistake and its consumption would have caused you severe problems. We deeply apologise for our mistake and promise to never deliver expired food products in the future. Also, we suggest you to check the expiry date of the product before opening the seal. Once again we apologise to you and you can trust us as will see to it that such mistakes are not committed in the future. Yours faithfully, Angela William.
Dear Sir/Madam, I
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am executive
manager of KFC store
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apologise
on behalf of all the staff to you for delivering expired food
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product
two days back. I
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realised
my
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mistake
this morning after receiving your complaint letter and
hence
writing this apology letter to you. You had ordered for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
two days back. Unfortunately, while delivering it, we somehow did not notice the expiry date of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
. I know it is our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
and its consumption would have caused you severe problems. We
deeply
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apologise
for our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
and promise to never deliver expired food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
in the future.
Also
, we suggest you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the expiry date of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
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before
opening the seal. Once again we
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apologise
to you and you can trust us as will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
to it that such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistakes
are not committed in the future. Yours
faithfully
, Angela William.

IELTS letter Your client wrote a complaint letter to you about the product which bought some days ago. That product was expired. You should write apology letter to him/her.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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