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Letter giving advice for my friend.

Letter giving advice for my friend. JLoPe
Dear Elizabeth First of all, thank you for writing me this letter. I'm sorry to hear about your problems. Maybe I can give you some advice and things will get better soon. Here's what I think you should do. I think, it's very bad thing, being annoyed with relations, especially, sisters. I would advise you, firstly you need to beg sisters pardon, because she's elder than you. Why don't you want to give chance for your feelings? I'm sure, that you really want to do it, but your fervour just against with you. It would be a good idea to make a surprise for your sister. For example: to make a cake with writing "Sorry, for my bad manners! " or to buy beautiful flowers with letter "I'm sorry! " or to invite for the dinner. The best advice I can give you only seeing each other is boundary of all. I would very much like to know if this was helpful to your sadness. Let me know what happens. Best regards. Emilie.
Dear Elizabeth
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elder
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a surprise for your sister.
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a cake with writing
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to invite for the dinner. The best advice I can give you
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seeing each other is boundary of all. I would
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IELTS letter Letter giving advice for my friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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