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First of all, thank you for writing me this letter. I am sorry to hear about your problems. May be I can give you some advice and things will get better soon.

First of all, thank you for writing me this letter. I am sorry to hear about your problems. May be I can give you some advice and things will get better soon. NVrAq
Your first problem is about how to manage your time efficiently while preparing for exam. I was strongly recommend that you should read a lot, but not unnecessary facts. Use different useful ways for preparing exam, such as do a lot practical tasks. You ought to repeat all the strongest materials for exam. Because repeating is the best learning way. The second problem of yours is how to cope with both study and doing household chores at home. Of course, that's a big problem for all examiners. I think you should manage your time clearly. At first you make a list of your houseworks and divide them into types. One of them the most necessary, next of them important and last of them unnecessary doing tasks in these days or till exam. For instance, building houses for cats is I think that last one. And certainly use ear-bud in every time while doing your house works and listen audio materials. And the last one is if I were you I wouldn't relieve the anxiety before exams. To my mind it isn't worthy to worry. You should believe yourself and your knowledge and skills. It will be OK. Hope my advice works. Let me know what happens. Best wishes, Elizabeth.
Your
first
problem is about how to manage your time
efficiently
while preparing for exam. I was
strongly
recommend
that you should read a lot,
but
not unnecessary facts.
Use
different
useful ways for preparing exam, such as do a
lot
practical tasks. You ought to repeat all the strongest materials for exam.
Because
repeating is the best learning way. The second problem of yours is how to cope with both study and doing household chores at home.
Of course
, that's a
big
problem for all examiners. I
think
you should manage your time
clearly
. At
first you
make
a list of your
houseworks
and divide them into types. One of them the most necessary,
next
of them
important
and last of them unnecessary doing tasks in these days or till exam.
For instance
, building
houses
for cats is I
think
that last one. And
certainly
use
ear-bud in every time while doing your
house
works and listen audio materials. And the last one is if I were you I wouldn't relieve the anxiety
before
exams. To my mind it isn't worthy to worry. You should believe yourself and your knowledge and
skills
. It will be OK. Hope my advice works.
Let
me know what happens. Best wishes, Elizabeth.
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IELTS letter First of all, thank you for writing me this letter. I am sorry to hear about your problems. May be I can give you some advice and things will get better soon.

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