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You have just missed your friends party you write an appologise letter

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Dear Scarlet, What can I say, exept I am so sorry that I missed your birthday party last week due to my unexpected business trip. I hope you celebrated your birthday party extremely good with your family members, siblings and other nearest, unfortunately I was unable to attend. I am already special plan your birthday along with I took a gift an antique souvenir that suits your taste for you but only hours before my boss command to take off to Canada immediately and must take part in a job meeting. I am really sorry I not inform you. Yesterday I came back hometown and write you as posible as and I hope write answer letter to me soon. I am so sorry my friend and now if you consent I will preform evening party next Sunday in five star restaurant for to justify my guilt. I hope my apologies will be accepted. LovelySimona Addison
Dear Scarlet, What can I say,
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exept
I am
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so
sorry that I missed your birthday party last week due to my unexpected business trip. I hope you celebrated your birthday party
extremely
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good
with your family members, siblings and other nearest, unfortunately I was unable to attend. I am already special plan your birthday along with I took a gift an antique souvenir that suits your taste for you
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but
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only
hours
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before
my boss command to take off to Canada immediately and
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must
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take part
in a job meeting.
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I
am
really
sorry I not inform you. Yesterday I came back hometown and write you as
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posible
as and I hope write answer letter to me
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soon
. I am
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so
sorry my friend and
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now
if you consent I will preform evening party
next
Sunday in
'five star' is missing a hyphen.
five star
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restaurant
for to justify my guilt. I hope my apologies will be
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accepted
.
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LovelySimona
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Addison
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IELTS letter You have just missed your friends party you write an appologise letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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