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Apology letter for insulting

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Dear Mr Hilton, I would like to offer my sincere apologies for the inconvinience and for the bad behaviour of my sons. As you know, my family and my children very well-known over our town. Yesterday, when you came our home, I was cooking palov, and my children were helping me to raw the vegetables. Suddenly, you came and asked us to turn off gase. My children did not understand anything that situation. And they insulted on you that timr and broke down your imstruments. Because, they did not know our debts from the gase. So that, please allow me suggest feeing these instruments. I hope, you will accept my suggestion and apologising for their bad behaviour. Yours sincerely
Dear Mr Hilton, I would like to offer my sincere apologies for the
inconvinience
and for the
bad
behaviour
of my sons. As you know, my family and my children
very
well-known over our town. Yesterday, when you came our home, I was cooking
palov
, and my children were helping me to raw the vegetables.
Suddenly
, you came and asked us to turn off
gase
. My children did not understand anything that situation. And they insulted on you that
timr
and broke down your
imstruments
.
Because
, they did not know our debts from the
gase
.
So
that,
please
allow
me
suggest
feeing
these instruments. I hope, you will accept my suggestion and
apologising
for their
bad
behaviour
. Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter Apology letter for insulting

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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