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Apology letter for insulting

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Dear Mr Hilton, I would like to offer my sincere apologies for the inconvinience and for the bad behaviour of my sons. As you know, my family and my children very well-known over our town. Yesterday, when you came our home, I was cooking palov, and my children were helping me to raw the vegetables. Suddenly, you came and asked us to turn off gase. My children did not understand anything that situation. And they insulted on you that timr and broke down your imstruments. Because, they did not know our debts from the gase. So that, please allow me suggest feeing these instruments. I hope, you will accept my suggestion and apologising for their bad behaviour. Yours sincerely
Dear Mr Hilton, I would like to offer my sincere apologies for the
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inconvinience
and for the
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bad
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behaviour
of my sons. As you know, my family and my children
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very
well-known over our town. Yesterday, when you came our home, I was cooking
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palov
, and my children were helping me to raw the vegetables.
Suddenly
, you came and asked us to turn off
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gase
. My children did not understand anything that situation. And they insulted on you that
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timr
and broke down your
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imstruments
.
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Because
, they did not know our debts from the
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gase
.
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So
that,
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please
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allow
me
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suggest
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feeing
these instruments. I hope, you will accept my suggestion and
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apologising
for their
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bad
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behaviour
. Yours
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sincerely

IELTS letter Apology letter for insulting

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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