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Giving advice letter to your friend

Giving advice letter to your friend 06A8Q
Dear Janna I am very happy to hear your wishes about entering university. That's why l am writing to you letter to give some advice on your preparation I heard much your hesitations about choosing faculty and if you are worried about sharing out time for preparation. lt must not be essential matter in studying. As for choosing branch, you must favour the best of them which is significant in your future. lt is said that there is an economical faculty which is related to foreign languages. l suggest you that should apply in this branch. Connection with languages of it is the important way to go abroad and exchange the knowledge and experience. Secondly, time management to readness for exams. You must arrange to do works and planned step by step in advance. Don't waste time, Cutting off cheating and typing with your friends is the tangible adviceIt would be appreciate, if you took consideration into my contemplationI look forward to hearing about success of your lifeBest wishesLusy
Dear Janna I am
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very
happy to hear your wishes about entering university. That's why l
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am
writing to you letter to give
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some
advice on your preparation I heard much your hesitations about choosing faculty and if you
are worried
about sharing out time for preparation.
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lt
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must
not be essential matter in studying. As for choosing branch, you
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must
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favour
the best of them which is significant in your future.
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lt
is said
that there is an economical faculty which
is related
to foreign languages.
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l
suggest you that should apply in this branch. Connection with languages of it is the
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important
way to go abroad and exchange the knowledge and experience.
Secondly
, time management to
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readness
for exams. You
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must
arrange to do works and planned step by step in advance. Don't waste time, Cutting off cheating and typing with your friends is the tangible
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adviceIt
would be
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appreciate
, if you took consideration into my
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contemplationI
look forward to hearing about success of your
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lifeBest
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wishesLusy
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IELTS letter Giving advice letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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