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Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter Describe why you cannot attend the meeting Explain how you have been helping your child study Propose another time to meet

Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter Describe why you cannot attend the meeting Explain how you have been helping your child study Propose another time to meet 7MX6
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to apologies for not able to attend the meeting with you on this Friday, which you had invited us to discuss of our son's low grade in the test. Actually, this Friday we will be at out of town due to one family function. The day after tomorrow we will go to join my brother-in-law's marriage. The marriage will be on Saturday. Hence, we must have to go few days earlier there to arrange the marriage ceremony. This is the reason me and wife cannot attend the meeting with you on this Friday. Moreover, we surprised to noticed our child's poor performance in the test. Even though my son is taking tuition classes in the evening with the experienced tutor, we also helping him in his study. After looking his latest result, we will start to do more care of him so that he will focus on his study well. I would be grateful if you could reschedule the meeting instead of this Friday. You may arrange the meeting in the next week as we will return back on Sunday from there. Therefore, we can discuss in this matter in proper way and we will work on your suggestions as a responsible parents. I hope you would accept my apologies and re-arrange the meeting as per your convenient time. Yours faithfully, David Zone
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing
Did you mean "to apologize" (American English) or "to apologise" (British English)?
to apologies
for not able to attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
with you on this Friday, which you had invited us to discuss of our son's low grade in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
.

Actually, this Friday we will be at out of town due to one family function. The day after tomorrow we will go to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
my brother-in-law's marriage. The marriage will be on Saturday.
Hence
, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go few days earlier there to arrange the marriage ceremony. This is the reason me and wife cannot attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
with you on this Friday.
Moreover
, we surprised to noticed our child's poor performance in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
.
Even though
my son is taking tuition classes in the evening with the experienced tutor, we
also
helping him in his study. After looking his latest result, we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to do more care of him
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that he will focus on his study well.

I would be grateful if you could reschedule the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
instead
of this Friday. You may arrange the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
in the
next
week as we will
Consider using "return".
return back
on Sunday from there.
Therefore
, we can discuss in this matter in proper
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
way and
we will work on your suggestions as a responsible parents.

I hope you would accept my apologies and re-arrange the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
as per your convenient time.

Yours
faithfully
, David Zone
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IELTS letter Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter Describe why you cannot attend the meeting Explain how you have been helping your child study Propose another time to meet

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