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You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it Write 150 words at least

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it Write 150 words at least mqqq
Dear Nick, Hope you are doing well! I'm doing fine. I am writing to let you know that I am selling my television. I remember the last time we met you were interested in buying a second hand television, so I thought you might be interested. Let me explain you my situation in more detail, my wife has gifted me a new LG television on my 30th Birthday. Because of which we can’t find enough place for 2 televisions in our apartment. Moreover, we can’t afford the sky connection for both the televisions as well. It's a 43-inch television with AI based capabilities and 3 HDMI ports. It also has a 4K HD resolution and an extended warranty of 3 years. Furthermore, it has inbuilt woofer speakers as well. Can you come over to see it on 20th of March? Also, please do let me know if you are not interested in buying. I look forward to hearing from you. Your friend, Michael Anderson
Dear Nick,

Hope you are doing well! I'm doing fine.

I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I am selling my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
remember the last time we met you
were interested
in buying a second hand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
,
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so
I
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thought
you might
be interested
.

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Let
me
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explain
you my situation in more detail, my wife has gifted me a new LG
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
on my 30th Birthday.
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Because
of which we can’t find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
place for 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
televisions
in our apartment.
Moreover
, we can’t afford the sky connection for both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
televisions
as well
.

It's a 43-inch
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
with AI based capabilities and 3 HDMI ports. It
also
has a 4K HD resolution and an extended warranty of 3 years.
Furthermore
, it has inbuilt woofer speakers
as well
.

Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
it on 20th of March?

Also
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you are not interested in buying.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your friend,

Michael Anderson

IELTS letter You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it Write 150 words at least

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  American English
10 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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