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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take 2oLk
Dear Mr. Gonzales, I am writing to let you know that I received the letter of complaint about the inconvenience that you had to experience. But more important is that I apologise about the noise that is coming from my place and I will try to keep it down. Let me explain my situation. I am actually refurnishing the whole kitchen including the floor tiles. This is a very difficult task for me to do by myself so I hired a construction worker who promised that it will be done within a day. However, the delivery of the furniture got late due to some reasons which made me have to wait for it to continue. Would you kindly bear with me for two more days? I promise there won't be a next time. I will always have your consent first before I make some serious decisions when it comes to ideas that will end up with some problems. I hope you will consider my matter favourably. Thank you for your patience. Best Regards, Harmandeep Brar
Dear Mr. Gonzales,

I am writing to
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let
you know that I received the letter of complaint about the inconvenience that you had to experience.
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But
more
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important
is that I
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apologise
about the noise
that is
coming from my place and I will try to
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keep
it down.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation. I am actually refurnishing the whole kitchen including the floor tiles. This is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult task for me to do by myself
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I hired a construction worker who promised that it will
be done
within a day.
However
, the delivery of the furniture
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got
late due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reasons which made me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
wait for it to continue.

Would you kindly bear with me for two more days? I promise there won't be a
next
time. I will always have your consent
first
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before
I
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make
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some
serious decisions when it
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comes
to
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ideas
that will
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end
up with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
problems.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will consider my matter
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favourably
.

Thank you for your patience.

Best Regards,

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Harmandeep
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Brar

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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