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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the coruse director of the cookery school. In you letter 1) Describe what you enjoyed about the course 2) Say how much cooking you've done since the course 3) Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the coruse director of the cookery school. In you letter 1) Describe what you enjoyed about the course 2) Say how much cooking you've done since the course 3) Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer NQO2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Nithin from Chennai, recently attended cookery course at your school. I am writing to give my feedbacks on the course as your cookery school has been requested. I am glad to share my experiece of the class where I have learned a lot new from the course. Most importantly the trainer is well knowledged and taken us in smooth way till last minute of the class. All my doubts has been cleared then and there with proper explanation and demonstration which gives more confident at end of the course. Lastly, a free cook book has been gifted as part of successful completion of course which I have never expected. After the session I have tried four different dishes which I have referred from gifted cook book and everone of my family loved it. It motivates me to try many more dishes. I am happy to share that my hobby has become cooking after the session. I humbly request you to continue arranging many more class as you are doing it now. To be more specific, I would love to take up course on healthy snacks which made from millet products. Looking forward to hear from you for another cookery session. Yours sincerely, Nithin Sankarlal.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
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Nithin
from Chennai, recently attended cookery
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
at your school. I am writing to give my feedbacks on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as your cookery school has
been requested
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am glad to share my
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experiece
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
where I have learned a lot new from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Most
importantly
the trainer is well
Possible spelling mistake found.
knowledged
and taken us in smooth way till last minute of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. All my doubts has
been cleared
then and there with proper explanation and demonstration which gives more confident at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
.
Lastly
, a free cook book has
been gifted
as part of successful completion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
which I have never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
.

After the session I have tried four
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
dishes which I have referred from gifted cook book and
Possible spelling mistake found.
everone
of my family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
it. It motivates me to try
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more dishes. I am happy to share that my hobby has become cooking after the session.

I
humbly
request you to continue arranging
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
as you are doing it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. To be more specific, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to take up
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on healthy snacks which made from millet products.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you for another cookery session.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Nithin
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Sankarlal
.

IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the coruse director of the cookery school. In you letter 1) Describe what you enjoyed about the course 2) Say how much cooking you've done since the course 3) Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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  American English
8 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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