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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the coruse director of the cookery school. In you letter 1) Describe what you enjoyed about the course 2) Say how much cooking you've done since the course 3) Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the coruse director of the cookery school. In you letter 1) Describe what you enjoyed about the course 2) Say how much cooking you've done since the course 3) Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer NQO2

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Nithin from Chennai, recently attended cookery course at your school. I am writing to give my feedbacks on the course as your cookery school has been requested. I am glad to share my experiece of the class where I have learned a lot new from the course. Most importantly the trainer is well knowledged and taken us in smooth way till last minute of the class. All my doubts has been cleared then and there with proper explanation and demonstration which gives more confident at end of the course. Lastly, a free cook book has been gifted as part of successful completion of course which I have never expected. After the session I have tried four different dishes which I have referred from gifted cook book and everone of my family loved it. It motivates me to try many more dishes. I am happy to share that my hobby has become cooking after the session. I humbly request you to continue arranging many more class as you are doing it now. To be more specific, I would love to take up course on healthy snacks which made from millet products. Looking forward to hear from you for another cookery session. Yours sincerely, Nithin Sankarlal.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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course
 as your cookery school has been requested
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am glad to share my Possible spelling mistake found.experience
experiece
 of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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course
. Most importantly
 the trainer is well Possible spelling mistake found.knowledge
knowledged
 and taken us in smooth way till last minute of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. All my doubts has been cleared
 then and there with proper explanation and demonstration which gives more confident at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. Lastly
, a free cook book has been gifted
 as part of successful completion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 which I have never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
.

After the session I have tried four This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 dishes which I have referred from gifted cook book and Possible spelling mistake found.everyoneever one
everone
 of my family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 it. It motivates me to try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more dishes. I am happy to share that my hobby has become cooking after the session.

I humbly
 request you to continue arranging This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 as you are doing it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. To be more specific, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to take up You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 on healthy snacks which made from millet products.

Looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you for another cookery session.

Yours sincerely
,

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Nithin
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Sankarlal
. 