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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take kQQ2
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to let you know that we have reached safe and sound in this beautiful accomodation which I am also thankful for. By the way, this is Harmandeep K. Brar and family, we are renting the house in Brampton. However, there are some weak furniture problem we are found and it's giving us a hard time to live with apart from that, everything that you've provided make us feel at home. Let me explain my situation. My mother has a weak back, so she really needs to be comfortable when sitting on the sofa or chairs otherwise it's not healthy. On the other hand, the beds are not in a good condition because we don't feel like the legs are strong enough to handle the weight of two people. Would you kindly provide us some new furniture? This will be really helpful for me and family to stay because the accomodation is very sufficient yet, the only problem is with the chairs, sofa, and beds only. I hope you will consider this matter favorably. Thank you so much for understanding. Best regards, Harmandeep
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to
let
you know that we have reached safe and sound in this
beautiful
accomodation
which I am
also
thankful for. By the way, this is
Harmandeep
K.
Brar
and family, we are renting the
house
in Brampton.
However
, there are
some
weak furniture
problem
we
are found
and it's giving us a
hard
time to
live
with apart from that, everything that you've provided
make
us feel at home.

Let
me
explain
my situation. My mother has a weak back,
so
she
really
needs to be comfortable when sitting on the sofa or chairs
otherwise
it's not healthy.
On the other hand
, the beds are not in a
good
condition
because
we don't feel like the legs are strong
enough
to handle the weight of two
people
.

Would you kindly provide us
some
new furniture? This will be
really
helpful for me and family to stay
because
the
accomodation
is
very
sufficient
yet
, the
only
problem is with the chairs, sofa, and beds
only
. I hope you will consider this matter
favorably
.

Thank you
so
much for understanding.

Best regards,

Harmandeep
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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