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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take n3lE
Dear Mr Jamieson, I am a tenant from the apartment located at 25 Duet Drive. I and my family have rented this unit approximately a week ago. During this time I have noticed that a few pieces of the furniture are not in a satisfactory state. Starting with the higher importance, several elements of the fridge are broken. The freezer which is supposed to work at a considerably low temperature is cooling worse than the fridge. The couch has a few spots where the leather peels off, probably, due to ageing. The areas where the leather peeled off are left with bright material, makes it look unpleasant. As for the fridge, it might only require to call the repairer. I would like to ask you to arrange the repairs after 5 pm during the workweek or at any time at the weekend. I am afraid that the couch needs to be replaced as it is no longer in a good condition. Kind regards, Anastasiia Grishina
Dear Mr Jamieson,

I am a tenant from the apartment located at 25 Duet Drive. I and my family have rented this unit approximately a week ago. During this time I have noticed that a few pieces of the furniture are not in a satisfactory state.

Starting with the higher importance, several elements of the fridge
are broken
. The freezer which
is supposed
to work at a
considerably
low temperature is cooling worse than the fridge. The couch has a few spots where the leather peels off,
probably
, due to
Possible spelling mistake. 'ageing' is British English.
ageing
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
areas where the leather peeled off are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
with bright material,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it look unpleasant.

As for the fridge, it might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
require to call the repairer. I would like to ask you to arrange the repairs after 5 pm during the workweek or at any time
The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.
at the weekend
. I am afraid that the couch needs to
be replaced
as it is no longer in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition.

Kind regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Anastasiia
Possible spelling mistake found.
Grishina

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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  American English
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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