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Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip OXj7

Dear Mr. Simpson, I am writing this letter to express my interest in accompanying my son ‘Apu’ on the school trip to Canada. I have been to Canada before but I was thinking to take my wife and son next year for a trip. However, since the school is already planning I’m thinking me and my wife would be available in July to join during the trip. I have visited many places in Canada and stayed there for many years so I’m thinking I can suggest some beautiful places which may benefit students for there educational life and get to know more about the culture of Canada. I also work in a company which organizes tours so that would also be a possible help from my side. I had two questions and I would appreciate if I could get the answer to them. Firstly, how much budget is for the trip and roughly what is the count of the students coming to the trip? Secondly, what is the mode of transportation preferred between the two cities in Canada? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Kaylee

Dear Mr. Simpson,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in accompanying my son ‘Possible spelling mistake found.APUCPUAPAAPCApeApt
Apu
’ on the school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 to Canada. I have been to Canada This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I was thinking to take my wife and son next
 year for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
. However
, since the school is already planning I’m thinking me and my wife would be available in July to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 during the trip.

I have visited This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places in Canada and stayed there for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I’m thinking I can suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 places which may benefit students for there educational life and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know more about the culture of Canada. I also
 work in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 which organizes tours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that would also
 be a possible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 from my side.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had two questions and I would appreciate if I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the answer to them. Firstly
, how much budget is for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 and roughly what is the count of the students coming to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
? Secondly
, what is the mode of transportation preferred between the two cities in Canada?

I hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Sincerely
,

Kaylee