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You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it a1jm
Dear Mr. Brown I am writing this letter in regards to the ipod I ordered from your website called sony. ca. The mini iPod I ordered was the Sony Px-1 on 17th February. My order number is 073265. I was very excited when the package arrived but was very disappointed when I saw the condition of the product. I would like to bring to your notice that the product I got cracks over that little music player. It was supposed to have an earphones and a charging wire but the one’s I received with it was totally ripped off. I did not expect it in this terrible condition. As a solution, I would like either the full refund of the product or I would like the replacement for free. I would wait for a week for any reply from your company or else I would have to take the complaint to the higher authority in your company. I’ll be attaching the copy of the receipt. Thanks for your attention and hope to hear from you soon. Your faithfully, David
Dear Mr. Brown

I am writing this letter
in regards to
the
ipod
I ordered from your website called
sony
.
ca
. The mini iPod I ordered was the Sony Px-1 on 17th February. My order number is 073265. I was
very
excited when the package arrived
but
was
very
disappointed when I
saw
the condition of the product.

I would like to bring to your notice that the product I
got
cracks over that
little
music player. It
was supposed
to have an earphones and a charging wire
but
the one’s I received with it was
totally
ripped off. I did not
expect
it in this terrible condition.

As a solution, I would like either the full refund of the product or I would like the replacement for free. I would wait for a week for any reply from your
company
or else I would
have to
take the complaint to the higher authority in your
company
. I’ll be attaching the copy of the receipt.

Thanks for your attention and hope to hear from you
soon
.

Your
faithfully
,

David
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IELTS letter You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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