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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take NDk0
Dear Mr. James My name is Lovedeep Singh. I am writing this letter to inform you about my bad experience in my last stay in your hotel last week. I was stayed in room number #405. AC was not working in that room and the temperature was recorded 34 degrees on that day. In order to reduce the temperature, I have done so many things like I called on reception area and explained everything to them, but no one responded me. I tried to open the window, but window was totally jammed and, I failed to open it. At last, I booked another room in another hotel at midnight because there was no any empty room left in your hotel. I would like to request you to please refund my booking fee, because as per hotel policies I am eligible for that. Moreover, I requested you to hire an overnight technician which will solve these kinds of problem if it occurs in future. Hope to hear from you soon Your Sincerely Lovedeep Singh
Dear Mr. James

My name is
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Lovedeep
Singh. I am writing this letter to inform you about my
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bad
experience in my last stay in your hotel
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last week
. I
was stayed
in
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room
number #405. AC was not working in that
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room
and the temperature
was recorded
34 degrees on that day.

In order to
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reduce
the temperature, I have done
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so
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many
things like I called on reception area and
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explained
everything to them,
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but
no one responded me. I tried to open the window,
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but
window was
totally
jammed and, I failed to open it. At last, I booked another
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room
in another hotel at midnight
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because
there was
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no
any empty
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room
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left
in your hotel.

I would like to request you to
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please
refund my booking fee,
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because
as per hotel policies I am eligible for that.
Moreover
, I requested you to hire an overnight technician which will solve these kinds of problem if it occurs
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Hope to hear from you
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soon


Your
Sincerely


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Lovedeep
Singh
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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  American English
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172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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