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ou are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

ou are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant xKBg
Dear manager, I am writing this letter to you in regarding my most recent unpleasent experience with food at your restaurant, Atithi. Let me explain you in detail. I am one of the members of Canadian Women organisation. I and other members of organisation regularly meets at your restaurant to discuss latest news and activities. Our experience of food and services have been satisfactory till our last visit. Even after waiting for about 30 minutes, we had received wrong meal and it was extremely unsavory because the food was burnt and uncooked. In addition, your staff's behavior was impolite and rude, when we have asked for another meal. I would like to draw your attention towards my experience with food as well as your staff members. I am requesting you for full refund for that meal because it did not match up the standards. Looking forward your positive improvement. Thank you Vaishali
Dear manager,

I am writing this letter to you in regarding my most recent
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unpleasent
experience with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
at your restaurant,
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Atithi
.

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Let
me
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explain
you in detail. I am one of the members of Canadian Women
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organisation
. I and other members of
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organisation
regularly
meets at your restaurant to discuss
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
news and activities. Our experience of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and services have been satisfactory till our last visit.

Even after waiting for about 30 minutes, we had received
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
meal and it was
extremely
unsavory
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
was burnt
and uncooked.
In addition
, your staff's behavior was impolite and rude, when we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
asked for
another meal.

I would like to draw your attention towards my experience with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
as well
as your staff members. I am requesting you for full refund for that meal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it did not match up the standards.

Looking forward your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
improvement.

Thank you

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Vaishali

IELTS letter ou are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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  American English
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151 words
6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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