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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties ANV1
Dear John, I really appreciate you for agreeing to to look after my house and specifically my dog while I’m going to Singapore. I am leaving on March 3rd and coming back on March 10th. If you ever need to contact me I have left all the numbers written on the sticky note on the fridge, and I’ll be staying in Marriott on the Orchard Lane. My dog name is Peggy and she is very friendly. She has her meals twice a day once in morning around 6 and the other in evening around 4. I usually feed her two cups of her dog food in her container which is next to the door to the backyard. Her leash is in the last shelf where the microwave is placed. Her walk routine is in the evening and some days in the morning as well. Her treats are also in the same shelf where her leash and other stuff is so feel free to give her once a day. She is well trained so she would ring the bell next to the door for the backyard when she wants to go to pee. I would also appreciate if you water my plants in the living room and the grass in my backyard. The plants in living room are watered twice every week and the grass three times in the week. The last thing is to make sure just to lock the main door when you go to bed. Feel free to use the garage to park your car and the food in the fridge. Make yourself comfortable in the house. Thank you so much again for all your help. Looking forward to seeing you on my return. Kind regards, Kaylee
Dear John,

I
really
appreciate you for agreeing
to to
look after my
house
and
specifically
my dog while I’m going to Singapore. I am leaving on March 3rd and coming back on March 10th. If you ever need to contact me I have
left
all the numbers written on the sticky note on the fridge, and I’ll be staying in Marriott on the Orchard Lane.

My dog name is Peggy and she is
very
friendly. She has her meals twice a day once in morning around 6 and the other in evening around 4. I
usually
feed her two cups of her dog food in her container which is
next
to the door to the backyard. Her leash is in the last shelf where the microwave
is placed
. Her walk routine is in the evening and
some
days in the morning
as well
.
Her
treats are
also
in the same shelf where her leash and other stuff is
so
feel free to give her once a day. She is
well trained
so
she would ring the bell
next
to the door for the backyard when she wants to go to pee.

I would
also
appreciate if you water my plants in the living room and the grass in my backyard. The plants in living room
are watered
twice every week and the grass three times in the week. The last thing is to
make
sure
just
to lock the main door when you go to bed. Feel free to
use
the garage to park your car and the food in the fridge.
Make
yourself comfortable in the
house
.

Thank you
so
much again for all your
help
. Looking forward to seeing you on my return.

Kind regards,

Kaylee
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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