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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you lOQK
Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am glad we have in touch through social media being in different country. Last week you have asked me about interesting story in my country. I am glad to share this news with you about Statue of Unity in Gujarat which has been recently opened. Being an Indian, I feel proud on our honorable PM Mr. Modi who have gifted an amazing Statue of Saradar Vallabhbhai Patel. This news has been spraded over the world and it is attracting people from all over the world. This place helps local people for new employment opportunity as well as expand tourism business. One thing fascinates me more is that satellite have captured the image of statue from space. I am really excited to visit this place with you when you will come India to see real beauty of a statue. Stay safe and hope to see you soon. With love, Vaishali
Dear Sam,

I hope you and your family are doing well. I am glad we have in touch through social media being in
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country. Last week you have asked me about interesting story in my country. I am glad to share this news with you about Statue of Unity in Gujarat which has been recently opened.

Being an Indian, I feel proud on our honorable PM Mr.
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Modi
who have gifted an amazing Statue of
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Saradar
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Vallabhbhai
Patel. This news has been
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spraded
over the world and it is attracting
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people
from all over the world.

This place
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helps
local
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people
for new employment opportunity
as well
as expand tourism business. One thing fascinates me more is
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that satellite have
captured the image of statue from space. I am
really
excited to visit this place with you when you will
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come
India to
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see
real beauty of a statue.

Stay safe and hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

With
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,

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Vaishali
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IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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