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Your child is going on a school trip abroad for three days and the headmaster of the school has asked any parents if they would like to come along to assist. You would like to go. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter: Say why you would like to go, Suggest what you could do to help during the trip, Ask some further questions about the trip

Dear Mr Dsouza, I am writing this letter in reference to the upcoming trip to Canada for which you are seeking people to accompany the students. I am the father of Vivaan Waja and would be delighted to join the tour in order to manage that group. My summer vacation is starting next week and therefore I will have time from the office to devote for this tour. Additionally, I have already been to this destination and roamed most of the places covering historical and museum sites. I can lend my experience from the trip to assist in planning the journey and guide the tour as I have a command over French language which I learned in my childhood. There are some things which I need to clarify. Firstly, about the itinerary which every one will be carrying. Secondly, the time of the flight? Additionally is the medical insurance taken for all people travelling on the tour? I look forward to being a part of the tour. Thank you Yours Sincerely, Deepak Waja
Dear Mr
Dsouza
,

I am writing this letter in reference to the upcoming trip to Canada for which you are seeking
people
to accompany the students. I am the father of
Vivaan
Waja
and would
be delighted
to
join
the tour in order to manage that group.

My summer vacation is starting
next
week and
therefore
I will have time from the office to devote for this tour.
Additionally
, I have already been to this destination and roamed most of the places covering historical and museum sites.

I can lend my experience from the trip to assist in planning the journey and guide the tour as I have a command over French language which I learned in my childhood.

There are
some
things which I need to clarify.
Firstly
, about the itinerary which every one will be carrying.
Secondly
, the time of the flight?
Additionally
is the medical insurance taken for all
people
travelling on the tour?

I look forward to being a part of the tour.

Thank you

Yours
Sincerely
,

Deepak
Waja
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IELTS letter Your child is going on a school trip abroad for three days and the headmaster of the school has asked any parents if they would like to come along to assist. You would like to go. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter: Say why you would like to go, Suggest what you could do to help during the trip, Ask some further questions about the trip

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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