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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Peter Thank you for the invitation and I am going to visit your country a month later. However, as I have not been there before, I would like to ask for some information before hence. Firstly, any kind of things do you and your family are favious in? Because I would like to buy something special for you as a gift in my country, and I do hope it is useful for you too. As I heard the weather at your side change rapidly recently, consequently, the second question I would like to ask would be any activities cannot be done and the clothing advise in the nearest future. Last but not least, the query would be about food. You know, I keen on trying differet dishes. Do you have any recommendation? I am eager to meet you face to face. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes Sam
Dear Peter

Thank you for the
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invitation and
I am going to visit your country a month later.
However
, as I have not been there
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before
, I would like to
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ask for
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some
information
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before
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Firstly
, any kind of things do you and your family are
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favious
in?
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Because
I would like to
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buy
something special for you as a gift in my country, and I do hope it is useful for you too. As I heard the weather at your side
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change
rapidly
recently,
consequently
, the second question I would like to ask would be any activities cannot
be done
and the clothing advise in the nearest future. Last
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but
not least, the query would be about food. You know, I keen on trying
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differet
dishes. Do you have any recommendation?

I am eager to
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meet
you face to face. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Best wishes

Sam

IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.