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The manager at the company you work for is going to retire next month. The manager’s assistant has invited some suggestions about what kind of event they should do to say goodbye to him. Write a letter to your manager's assistant. • say what kind of event you have in your mind • mention why you liked him/her as a manager • what kind of present can be given to your manager

Dear Sir/ Madam, Hope you and your family are safe and healthy. I am writing this letter to express my satisfaction with regards to your invitation for my recommendations and would like to suggest as to what type of event you can consider to do for the farewell of our favorite manager; Mr. Mehta. One of the activities which would surely be enjoyable could be to keep a farewell party on our office terrace along with some beverages. Since Mr. Mehta loves to speak to the team, you could keep some time in your calendar for sharing his experience in the company. One of the reasons we like him as a manager/leader is his skill to motivate everyone and his speech on his last day would surely make a positive impact on us. Furthermore, he loves wrist watches which would definitely be a nice gift for him if you could get one from any of the top brands like Rolex or Rado. Hope you find my suggestions helpful and would result into smooth planning of the event. If any more inputs are required, I am available at any time. Yours sincerely, Ravi Mandhan
Dear Sir/ Madam,

Hope you and your family are safe and healthy. I am writing this letter to express my satisfaction
with regards to
your invitation for my recommendations and would like to suggest as to what type of
event
you can
consider to do
for the farewell of our favorite manager; Mr.
Mehta
.

One of the activities which would
surely
be enjoyable could be to
keep
a farewell party on our office terrace along with
some
beverages. Since Mr.
Mehta
loves
to speak to the team, you could
keep
some
time in your calendar for sharing his experience in the
company
. One of the reasons we like him as a manager/leader is his
skill
to motivate everyone and his speech on his last day would
surely
make
a
positive
impact on us.

Furthermore
, he
loves
wrist
watches
which would definitely be a nice gift for him if you could
get
one from any of the top brands like Rolex or
Rado
.

Hope you find my suggestions helpful and would result into smooth planning of the
event
. If any more inputs
are required
, I am available at any time.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ravi
Mandhan
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IELTS letter The manager at the company you work for is going to retire next month. The manager’s assistant has invited some suggestions about what kind of event they should do to say goodbye to him. Write a letter to your manager's assistant. • say what kind of event you have in your mind • mention why you liked him/her as a manager • what kind of present can be given to your manager

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  American English
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192 words
6.0
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