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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

Dear max, Hope you are doing well. I am glad that finally you are taking off from your hectic schedule by choosing to spend time by enjoying this camping. I guarantee this holiday would be an outstanding experience for you as one is going to enjoy local beauty and breathtaking mountain views. Be sure to take a warm jacket and snow shoes to protect yourself from cold winds which seems to be a drawback. Thinking of the experience of camping always rejuvenate my mind with cherishing memories which I had taken from shimla last year and really want to experience again. However, my boss has given me an important work of office on which I have been working day and night. The reason, I would not be able to join as a company with you. Let me know your experience after finishing this venture besides don't forget to take snaps of huge mountains. Yours loving,

Dear max,

Hope you are doing well. I am glad that finally
 you are taking off from your hectic schedule by choosing to spend time by enjoying this camping.

I guarantee this holiday would be an outstanding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 for you as one is going to enjoy local beauty and breathtaking mountain views. Be sure to take a warm jacket and snow shoes to protect yourself from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 winds which seems to be a drawback.

Thinking of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 of camping always rejuvenate my mind with cherishing memories which I had taken from Possible spelling mistake found.shim la
shimla
 last year and really
 want to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 again. However
, my boss has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 me an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 work of office on which I have been working day and night. The reason, I would not be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 as a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 after finishing this venture besides
 don't forget to take snaps of huge mountains.

Yours loving, 

IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

155 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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