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Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Dear Sir or Madam, Today while reading the news papers i saw a advertisiment about constructing a shopping centre very close to my home and also i saw a developers plan about shoppin centre. First of all i was shock while reading the news paper because shopping centre is very close to my home and i'm concern about my privacy due to shopping centre means a plethora number of public are visited daily and also cars and bikes sounds from the morning to evening it create ample of disturbens to me and my family members. I'm asking about construction plan and parking plane of the shopping centre due to the construction site is very near to my home and after opening of the shopping centre infront of the my house gate i shound not see any cars and bikes i need a letter from council giving clarification all my concerns. Soon i'm expecting a letter from you, Thanking you, Mahesh. K
Dear Sir or Madam,

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was shock while reading the
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news paper
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shopping
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concern about my privacy due to
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shopping
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centre
means a plethora number of public
are visited
daily and
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to me and my family members.

I'm asking about construction plan and parking
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shopping
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near to my home and after opening of the
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shopping
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centre
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gate
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any cars and bikes
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need a letter from council giving clarification all my concerns.

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expecting a letter from you,

Thanking you,

Mahesh. K

IELTS letter Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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