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You own old item that you think is valuable and would to sell

You own old item that you think is valuable and would to sell 85LMV

Dear sir, I am writing this letter in regards to sell an antique watch which I got from my grandfather. I found your shop advertisement in local news paper and I am glad that you buy and sell valuable old items. I have a 1891 Rolex watch with me. I got that one from my grandfather. He owned it for a long time and gave it to me as a birthday gift. It is working absoluetly fine without any scracthes on it. Pandameic affected my bussiness and I lost all most all my investors in it. To avoid the morgauge I want sell the watch which I got from my grandfather. Considering its age, condition and market value, I am expecting at least 500, 000 dollars for it. Please reply me with the time that you are free to talk about this. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 sell an antique This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 from my grandfather. I found your shop advertisement in local This word is normally spelled as one.newspaper
news paper
 and I am glad that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 and sell valuable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 items.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have a 1891 Rolex This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 with me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 that one from my grandfather. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 it for a long time and gave it to me as a birthday gift. It is working Possible spelling mistake found.absolutely
absoluetly
 fine without any Possible spelling mistake found.scratches
scracthes
 on it.

Possible spelling mistake found.Pandemic
Pandameic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 my Possible spelling mistake found.businessbossinessfussinessbushiness
bussiness
 and I lost Did you mean "almost"?almost
all most
 all my investors in it. To avoid the Possible spelling mistake found.mortgagemorgue
morgauge
 I want sell the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 from my grandfather. Considering its age, condition and market value, I am expecting at least 500, 000 dollars for it. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 reply me with the time that you are free to talk about this.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. 