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You own old item that you think is valuable and would to sell

You own old item that you think is valuable and would to sell 85LMV
Dear sir, I am writing this letter in regards to sell an antique watch which I got from my grandfather. I found your shop advertisement in local news paper and I am glad that you buy and sell valuable old items. I have a 1891 Rolex watch with me. I got that one from my grandfather. He owned it for a long time and gave it to me as a birthday gift. It is working absoluetly fine without any scracthes on it. Pandameic affected my bussiness and I lost all most all my investors in it. To avoid the morgauge I want sell the watch which I got from my grandfather. Considering its age, condition and market value, I am expecting at least 500, 000 dollars for it. Please reply me with the time that you are free to talk about this. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
sell an antique
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watch
which I
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got
from my grandfather. I found your shop advertisement in local
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news paper
and I am glad that you
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buy
and sell valuable
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old
items.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have a 1891 Rolex
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watch
with me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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got
that one from my grandfather. He
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owned
it for a long time and gave it to me as a birthday gift. It is working
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absoluetly
fine without any
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scracthes
on it.

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Pandameic
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affected
my
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bussiness
and I lost
Did you mean "almost"?
all most
all my investors in it. To avoid the
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morgauge
I want sell the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
from my grandfather. Considering its age, condition and market value, I am expecting at least 500, 000 dollars for it.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
reply me with the time that you are free to talk about this.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

IELTS letter You own old item that you think is valuable and would to sell

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
150 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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