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Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident GkpB
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that we met with an accident during our holiday and a car got damaged which was hired from your Kenton store. We have hired a family car on 26th January as we are traveling to London. I was driving during night time and the weather was not good. It was a rainy night and the roads were slippery. I have maintained minimum speed, but suddenly something came on the middle of the road. My car got crashed with roadside divider. Fortunately, no one was injured in this accident. However, the car was badly damaged. I would request you to send mechanic to fix the car. Also, if possible to arrange new car as I need to stay some more days in London. Thank you for your assistance. Looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Nilam Chauhan
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that we met with an accident during our holiday and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
damaged which
was hired
from your Kenton store.

We have hired a family
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car
on 26th January as we are traveling to London. I was driving during
This word is normally spelled as one.
night time
and the weather was not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. It was a rainy night and the roads were slippery. I have maintained minimum speed,
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but
suddenly
something came
The usual prepositions to use when surrounded is "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the middle"?
on the middle
of the road. My
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car
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
crashed with roadside divider.
Fortunately
, no one
was injured
in this accident.
However
, the
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car
was
badly
damaged.

I would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
mechanic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the
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car
.
Also
, if possible to arrange new
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car
as I need to stay
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
more days in London.

Thank you for your assistance. Looking forward for your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nilam
Chauhan

IELTS letter Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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145 words
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