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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you 9180
Dear John, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing this letter to inform you that the exhibition has been starting from 5th Nov till 15th Nov regarding arts and crafts. Whereas, I know well that you have fond of new arts and sculptures. Actually, I went there on the first day of the exhibit with my uncle, he is an event manager there. Hence, I got passes of VIP entry for all days. Therefore, the event is related to historical drawings and ancient sculpture, which is bought from the Eqypt. It will be here for 10 days from 10 am to 5 pm. As I know that you are a bachelor in Arts and Crafts, you could gain lots of information from old images and structures. Hereof, it would be beneficial to you in Masters degree. Therefore, I would like to invite you to the festival. You can come over on Saturday or Sunday as it will be a weekend and we can also have lunch together. I am looking forward to your response. See you soon. Best Regards,
Dear John, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing this letter to inform you that the exhibition has been starting from 5th Nov till 15th Nov regarding arts and crafts. Whereas, I know well that you have fond of new arts and sculptures. Actually, I went there on the
first
day of the exhibit with my uncle, he is an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
manager there.
Hence
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
passes of VIP entry for all days.
Therefore
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
is related
to historical drawings and ancient sculpture, which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from the
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Eqypt
. It will be here for 10 days from 10 am to 5 pm. As I know that you are a bachelor in Arts and Crafts, you could gain lots of information from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
images and structures. Hereof, it would be beneficial to you in
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree.
Therefore
, I would like to invite you to the festival. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over on Saturday or Sunday as it will be a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
weekend and
we can
also
have lunch together. I am looking forward to your response.
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See
you
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soon
. Best Regards,
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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6.0
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