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You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In the letter, you should: • Why you want to apply • What your future goals are • Why it would be beneficial for the company.

You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In the letter, you should: • Why you want to apply • What your future goals are • Why it would be beneficial for the company. Gk2B
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of Soft skill trainer, published in the Hindustan Times on 27/03/2021. I have been working with your company since last two years as a part-time content writer. Before joining this company, I was working as a soft skill trainer with XYZ Company. Since I am currently working on a part-time basis, I would like to continue as a full-time employee in your organisation. Recruiting internally is always less time-consuming and cost-effective for any company. I not only know the company and its culture well, but I am also familiar with the staff and the management. Therefore, I will not require any induction training. Moreover, I also have a proven performance record. I believe, having a combined experience of training and content writing, I feel that I would be the best fit for this position. I appreciate your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Kevin
Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for the position of Soft
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skill
trainer, published in the Hindustan Times on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
27/03/2021
. I have been working with your
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company
since last two years as a part-time content writer.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
joining this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
, I was working as a soft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
trainer with XYZ
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Company
. Since I am
currently
working on a part-time basis, I would like to continue as a full-time employee in your
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
.

Recruiting
internally
is always less time-consuming and cost-effective for any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. I not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
know the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and its culture well,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I am
also
familiar with the staff and the management.
Therefore
, I will not require any induction training.
Moreover
, I
also
have a proven performance record. I believe, having a combined experience of training and content writing, I feel that I would be the best fit for this position.

I appreciate your time and consideration.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully


Kevin
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IELTS letter You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In the letter, you should: • Why you want to apply • What your future goals are • Why it would be beneficial for the company.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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