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You want to sell some of your furniture.you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.

You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. pGn3
Dear samYou know, we'll be moving to a new house soon and there are a few things that's won't be able to take with me. My new hose is bit small, thats why I want''s to sell of my few furniture and I wondering if you might interested? Do you remember my dining table, that table I like most. I want to sell the dining table, because it size is too big at my new house. This table made by woods and well decoration and top side of this table we use glass. eight setted dining table I want sell with you being low prices, you know this table I sell the best price at outsider. If you are interesting give me a ring and let me know. Your loving Jhon
Dear
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know, we'll be moving to a new
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house
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and there are a few things that's won't be able to take with me. My new hose is
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bit
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small
,
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thats
why I want''s to
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sell
of my
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few furniture
and
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I wondering
if you might
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interested
? Do you remember my dining
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table
, that
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table
I like most. I want to
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sell
the dining
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table
,
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because
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it
size is too
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big
at my new
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house
. This
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table
made by woods and well decoration and top side of this
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table
we
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use
glass.
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eight
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setted
dining
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table
I want
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sell
with you being low prices, you know this
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table
I
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sell
the best price at outsider. If you are interesting give me a ring and
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let
me know. Your loving
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Jhon

IELTS letter You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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