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Write about the following topic: You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter: - Give details about the job. - Why it is important to you. - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. Write at least 150 words.

: You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter: - Give details about the job. - Why it is important to you. - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. eoOJ

Dear Mr Chan, I am writing to request for a letter of reference which is used to apply for a job I am interested in. The post I am going to apply for is a software engineer role which was advertised by Apple. It is once in a blue moon that Apple will open a role in software engineer locally. I do not want to miss this chance to enter such a huge and famous company. Consequently, I am sincerely hoping you can write me a letter of reference. As a fresh graduate, I guess it is necessary for a professional person like you to provide some description for me. As a result, it will be great if you can describe my personal abilities and characteristics in the letter. I would appreciate it if you can accomplish my wish. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Doe

Dear Mr Chan,

I am writing to request for a letter of reference which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to apply for a job I am interested
 in.

The post I am going to apply for is a software engineer role which was advertised
 by Apple. It is once in a blue moon that Apple will open a role in software engineer locally
. I do not want to miss this chance to enter such a huge and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Consequently
, I am sincerely
 hoping you can write me a letter of reference.

As a fresh graduate, I guess it is necessary for a professional person like you to provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 description for me. As a result
, it will be great if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 my personal abilities and characteristics in the letter.

I would appreciate it if you can accomplish my wish. I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

John Doe

IELTS letter : You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter: - Give details about the job. - Why it is important to you. - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

151 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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