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Write about the following topic: You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter: - Give details about the job. - Why it is important to you. - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. Write at least 150 words.

: You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter: - Give details about the job. - Why it is important to you. - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. eoOJ
Dear Mr Chan, I am writing to request for a letter of reference which is used to apply for a job I am interested in. The post I am going to apply for is a software engineer role which was advertised by Apple. It is once in a blue moon that Apple will open a role in software engineer locally. I do not want to miss this chance to enter such a huge and famous company. Consequently, I am sincerely hoping you can write me a letter of reference. As a fresh graduate, I guess it is necessary for a professional person like you to provide some description for me. As a result, it will be great if you can describe my personal abilities and characteristics in the letter. I would appreciate it if you can accomplish my wish. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Doe
Dear Mr Chan,

I am writing to request for a letter of reference which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to apply for a job I
am interested
in.

The post I am going to apply for is a software engineer role which
was advertised
by Apple. It is once in a blue moon that Apple will open a role in software engineer
locally
. I do not want to miss this chance to enter such a huge and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
Consequently
, I am
sincerely
hoping you can write me a letter of reference.

As a fresh graduate, I guess it is necessary for a professional person like you to provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
description for me.
As a result
, it will be great if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
my personal abilities and characteristics in the letter.

I would appreciate it if you can accomplish my wish. I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Doe
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IELTS letter : You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter: - Give details about the job. - Why it is important to you. - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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