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Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Why you enjoy trip, what ayou are doing there, Invite her to visit now

Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Why you enjoy trip, what ayou are doing there, Invite her to visit now 13jA
Hey sofia, Hope you are going well and this letter finds you in radiant health and vivid spirit. I feel accoustic to share that I have visited to maldives with our college friends. We reached there before a week and enjoyed the beautiful landscapes of this location together. Nowadays, we have rented a lounge nearby coastal area and playing at the beach. The sunshine visible from the clouds and water of beach coming at shore touches the heart and soothes the brain. All of this have refresh my mind from all the stresses of workaholic life. Thereby, I invite you to join us to enchant natural beauty of this coastal area. Surely, here we create some nostalgic memories together which will strong our friendship for rest of our life. For that aspect, I am sending flight tickets from chandigarh to maldives. Soon expecting you to join us. Your friend, Divya.
Hey
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sofia
, Hope you are going well and this letter finds you in radiant health and vivid spirit. I feel
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accoustic
to share that I have visited to
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maldives
with our college friends. We reached there
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before
a week and enjoyed the
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beautiful
landscapes of this location together. Nowadays, we have rented a lounge nearby coastal area and playing at the beach. The sunshine visible from the clouds and water of beach coming at shore touches the heart and soothes the brain. All of this have
Use past participle here: "refreshed".
refresh
my mind from all the
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stresses
of workaholic life. Thereby, I invite you to
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join
us to enchant natural beauty of this coastal area.
Surely
, here we create
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some
nostalgic memories together which will strong our friendship for rest of our life. For that aspect, I am sending flight tickets from
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chandigarh
to
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maldives
.
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Soon
expecting you to
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join
us. Your friend, Divya.
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IELTS letter Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Why you enjoy trip, what ayou are doing there, Invite her to visit now

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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