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Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Why you enjoy trip, what ayou are doing there, Invite her to visit now

Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Why you enjoy trip, what ayou are doing there, Invite her to visit now 13jA

Hey sofia, Hope you are going well and this letter finds you in radiant health and vivid spirit. I feel accoustic to share that I have visited to maldives with our college friends. We reached there before a week and enjoyed the beautiful landscapes of this location together. Nowadays, we have rented a lounge nearby coastal area and playing at the beach. The sunshine visible from the clouds and water of beach coming at shore touches the heart and soothes the brain. All of this have refresh my mind from all the stresses of workaholic life. Thereby, I invite you to join us to enchant natural beauty of this coastal area. Surely, here we create some nostalgic memories together which will strong our friendship for rest of our life. For that aspect, I am sending flight tickets from chandigarh to maldives. Soon expecting you to join us. Your friend, Divya.

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IELTS letter Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Why you enjoy trip, what ayou are doing there, Invite her to visit now

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

150 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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