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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir DjPa
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to an international flight that I missed due to reasons beyond my control. For the past two weeks, I have been traveling for business and speaking at international conferences. Unfortunately, I arrived to the Tokyo airport over three hours delayed yesterday afternoon, due to the technical difficulties experienced by one of your company's aircrafts. Consequently, I missed my connecting flight from Tokyo to Madrid, and could not attend the conference. As a result of the delay, my company had to send another executive to speak at the conference in Madrid. This is not only a major inconvenience on our end, but it is a costly expenditure as well. Additionally, I have had to pay out of pocket for my lodgings in Madrid. Since the delay was caused by your aircraft, I hope that you will compensate me for the cost of my lodgings in Madrid as well as my additional flight home to Toronto, Canada. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Amanda Traynor Word Count: 174
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
an international flight that I missed due to reasons beyond my control.

For the past two weeks, I have been traveling for business and speaking at international conferences. Unfortunately, I arrived to the Tokyo airport over three hours delayed yesterday afternoon, due to the technical difficulties experienced by one of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's
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aircrafts
.
Consequently
, I missed my connecting flight from Tokyo to Madrid, and could not attend the conference.

As a result
of the delay, my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
another executive to speak at the conference in Madrid. This is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a major inconvenience on our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
,
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but
it is a costly expenditure
as well
.
Additionally
, I have had to pay
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
out of pocket
for my lodgings in Madrid.

Since the delay
was caused
by your aircraft, I hope that you will compensate me for the cost of my lodgings in Madrid
as well
as my additional flight home to Toronto, Canada.

I look forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amanda
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Traynor


Word Count: 174
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IELTS letter You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir

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9 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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