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Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday,

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, pa7B3
Dear Sir/Madam, I have recently rented a toyata altis car from your company and let me tell you, you have a world-class employees working in your company. The quality of the car was excellent and the service you provide that was impressive as per my experience. It was hired from the Delhi office a week ago. It is a regret that a accident has spoiled my holiday plans and caused some damage to the car. I was going to pick my cousin from the airport and was standing on red light. when some another car banged from behind. The headlights were slightly broken and the bumper also got damaged. A police officer on duty lodged a complaint against that person and he will be compensating all rhe claims. I am ready to cooperate in this matter wherever you need my help. Yours sincerely Pooja
Dear Sir/Madam, I have recently rented a
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toyata
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altis
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car
from your
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company
and
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let
me
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tell
you, you have a world-
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class
employees working in your
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company
. The quality of the
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car
was excellent and the service you provide that was impressive as per my experience. It
was hired
from the Delhi office a week ago. It is a regret that
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a
accident has spoiled my holiday plans and caused
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some
damage to the
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car
. I was going to pick my cousin from the airport and was standing on red light.
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when
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some
another
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car
banged from behind. The headlights were
slightly
broken and the bumper
also
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got
damaged. A police officer on duty lodged a complaint against that
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person and
he will be compensating all
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claims. I am ready to cooperate in this matter wherever you need my
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help
.

Yours
sincerely
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Pooja

IELTS letter Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday,

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  American English
2 paragraphs
143 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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