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Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday,

Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, pa7B3

Dear Sir/Madam, I have recently rented a toyata altis car from your company and let me tell you, you have a world-class employees working in your company. The quality of the car was excellent and the service you provide that was impressive as per my experience. It was hired from the Delhi office a week ago. It is a regret that a accident has spoiled my holiday plans and caused some damage to the car. I was going to pick my cousin from the airport and was standing on red light. when some another car banged from behind. The headlights were slightly broken and the bumper also got damaged. A police officer on duty lodged a complaint against that person and he will be compensating all rhe claims. I am ready to cooperate in this matter wherever you need my help. Yours sincerely Pooja

Dear Sir/Madam, I have recently rented a Possible spelling mistake found.Toyota
toyata
Possible spelling mistake found.altosantisaltsalt is
altis
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you, you have a world-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 employees working in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. The quality of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 was excellent and the service you provide that was impressive as per my experience. It was hired
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a
 accident has spoiled my holiday plans and caused This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 damage to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. I was going to pick my cousin from the airport and was standing on red light. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
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some
 another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 banged from behind. The headlights were slightly
 broken and the bumper also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 damaged. A police officer on duty lodged a complaint against that Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).person, and
person and
 he will be compensating all Possible spelling mistake found.thehesherueryeChe
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 claims. I am ready to cooperate in this matter wherever you need my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

Yours sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.Poona
Pooja