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Write a letter to your penpal about your most memorable experiences.

Write a letter to your penpal about your most memorable experiences. rayyk
Dear Amber, I received your letter asking after my family last week. My parents and I are absolutely well-being. How do you do in these recent days? I hope you'll be great and happy with your family. In your letter, I saw you fancy knowing about my most memorable experiences. Concidentally, I saw the Fuji mountain behind your postcard that reminds me of my wonderful vacation in Japan with mom and grandma when my fourth grade has been ended. That was the most remarkable experiences of my life My family started the overseas vacation in the summer of my fourth grade. It was a six-day trip to Japan. We flew there, and the first location setting foot was Tokyo - the capital of Japan. I was very enthusiastic and looking forward to the trip to have a more unforgettable and extraordinary experience of my lifetime. Beginning with my first day there, my mom and I went to Akihabara - a bustling commercial center famous for its small to large-scale electrical goods stores. My mom bought plenty of new modern electric things owning to their convenience and functionality. After that, we took a glance at the Tokyo Anime Center. I was overwhelmed by the lively and vibrant "Led Building" advertisements, which was so astounding that I couldn't help myself buy those "anime" books to read and know more about Japanese idiosyncratic ideas. After that, we took lots of photographs of the view of Tokyo
Dear Amber, I received your letter asking after my family last week. My parents and I are
absolutely
well-being. How do you do in these recent days? I hope you'll be great and happy with your family. In your letter, I
saw
you fancy knowing about my most memorable experiences.
Concidentally
, I
saw
the Fuji mountain behind your postcard that reminds me of my wonderful vacation in Japan with mom and grandma when my fourth grade has
been ended
. That was the most remarkable experiences of my
life


My family
started
the overseas vacation in the summer of my fourth grade. It was a six-day trip to Japan. We flew there, and the
first
location setting foot was Tokyo
-
the capital of Japan. I was
very
enthusiastic and looking forward to the trip to have a more unforgettable and extraordinary experience of my lifetime.

Beginning with my
first
day there, my mom and I went to
Akihabara
-
a bustling commercial center
famous
for its
small
to large-scale electrical
goods
stores. My mom
bought
plenty
of new modern electric things owning to their convenience and functionality. After that, we took a glance at the Tokyo Anime Center. I
was overwhelmed
by the lively and vibrant
"
Led Building
"
advertisements, which was
so
astounding that I couldn't
help
myself
buy
those
"
anime
"
books to read and know more about Japanese idiosyncratic
ideas
. After that, we took lots of photographs of the view of
Tokyo
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your penpal about your most memorable experiences.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
242 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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