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Asking advise letter to my friend

Asking advise letter to my friend raydn

Dear Angelina, I am writing this letter to enquire about a holiday summer job in your country as well as I want to be fully aware how to apply directly. Clearly, we, all the students in our hometown, will be free in a few days. Undoubtedly, it is one of the best chances for us to broaden our experience. Therefore I intend to visit your place to take up a post closely related to teaching. Since having announced a three-month holiday I have launched to find a job by perusing adds on the net. However I have some difficulties in finding an accomodation adjacent to your city. It would be better if you could assist me to find an amiable host family in order to learn new culture and a course which contains a maximum of 10 students. I would be extremely grateful to you if I was informed much more jobs and host families. I am looking forward to hearing from you a prompt response. Yours faithfully, Kate

Dear Angelina, I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about a holiday summer job in your country as well
 as I want to be fully
 aware how to apply directly
. Clearly
, we, all the students in our hometown, will be free in a few days. Undoubtedly
, it is one of the best chances for us to broaden our experience. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 I intend to visit your place to take up a post closely
 related to teaching. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 having announced a three-month holiday I have launched to find a job by perusing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 on the net. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 difficulties in finding an Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
 adjacent to your city. It would be better if you could assist me to find an amiable host family in order to learn new culture and a course which contains a maximum of 10 students. I would be extremely
 grateful to you if I was informed
 much more jobs and host families. I am looking forward to hearing from you a prompt response. Yours faithfully
, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphKate.Kate!Kate?Kate:Kate,Kate;
Kate