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Write a paragraph, describle someone in your family. Use personalitiy adjectives and include extra information

Write a paragraph, describle someone in your family. Use personalitiy adjectives and include extra information qaEOw
Hi teacher, today I will write about my father. My father is a teacher, he is very funny, friendly and he always help people. The most memorable memory with my father is when I took the graduation exam although my father is seriously ill, he is very energetic and opyimistic to encuorage me to study well for exam. So I was able to complete my exam. I am very grateful to my father and love my father very much
Hi teacher,
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today
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father
. My
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father
is a teacher, he is
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very
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funny
,
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friendly and
he always
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "helps", "helped".
help
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people
. The most memorable memory with my
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father
is when I took the graduation exam although my
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father
is
seriously
ill, he is
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very
energetic and
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opyimistic
to
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encuorage
me to study well for exam.
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So
I was able to complete my exam. I am
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very
grateful to my
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father
and
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love
my
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father
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very
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
much
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IELTS letter Write a paragraph, describle someone in your family. Use personalitiy adjectives and include extra information

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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