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Dear maria, I hope everything goes well for you. I am writing in response to your request for more information about applying for courses and university. First of all, I have taken management and human resources courses at this university. Classes are held at different times of day from 8 am to 4 pm and also the whole course is 5 weeks. Beside the courses, the university has great access to public transport therefore you can get to your class very easily. The most important part about the institute is that the tuition can be paid in monthly installments although they give you a variety of options if you have any problems with payment. I really recommend this institution. Last but not least, you can apply online or attend. You can choose the courses on the website in a simple way but if you want to register in person you should go to the registration office and the receptionist will help you. I hope you find this letter useful. Best regards

Dear maria,

I hope everything goes well for you. I am writing in response to your request for more information about applying for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 and university.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I have taken management and human resources You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 at this university. Classes are held
 at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 times of day from 8 am to 4 pm and also
 the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 is 5 weeks.

Beside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
, the university has great access to public transport therefore
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get
 to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
easily
.

The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 part about the institute is that the tuition can be paid
 in monthly installments although they give you a variety of options if you have any problems with payment. I really
 recommend this institution.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, you can apply online or attend. You can choose the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 on the website Consider replacing "in a simple way" with the adverb for "simple"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a simple way
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if you want to register in person you should go to the registration office and the receptionist will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you.

I hope you find this letter useful.

Best regards